'Searching for Order'

 "For me, poetry is always a search for order.'' – Elizabeth Jennings

 

British poet Jennings, born in July of 1926, won many awards for her “orderly” poems, which as it often turns out were anything but.  She won acclaim for her lyric style including the prestigious Somerset Maugham Award for her second book of poetry A Way of Looking, and the W.H. Smith Literary Award for her 1987 Collected Works - both enjoyable and thoughtful reads. 

  

For Saturday’s Poem, here is Jennings’ 

   

In A Garden

When the gardener has gone, this garden

Looks wistful and seems waiting an event.

It is so spruce, a metaphor of Eden

And even more so since the gardener went,

 

Quietly godlike, but of course, he had

Not made me promise anything and I

Had no one tempting me to make the bad

Choice.
  Yet I still felt lost and wonder why?

Even the beech tree from next door which shares

Its shadow with me, seemed a kind of threat.

Everything was too neat, and someone cares 

In the wrong way.
  I need not have stood long

Mocked by the smell of a mown lawn, and yet

I did.

  Sickness for Eden was so strong.

 

 

 

 

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